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so yeah here are some sraps that never made it past the sketchy phase
starting from the top left (then right and down) it goes-
zero&ariah, my hollic oc
the day after halloween,
koa to the rescue, me running to hug my friend
someone ripping out her heart,
why?, zero being shocked,
and lastly my friend and i being dorks
starting from the top left (then right and down) it goes-
zero&ariah, my hollic oc
the day after halloween,
koa to the rescue, me running to hug my friend
someone ripping out her heart,
why?, zero being shocked,
and lastly my friend and i being dorks
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Technique ImpactI've never done a critique before outside of a studio, so here's my first try:
You're doing very well with the hands and I love the structure of the character design on the top right. Very original. I would suggest trying a more distinct transition from the ankle to the foot. The arms are a little on the long side, but that's an easy fix. I'm sure every artist has that issue at one point. I also encourage you to play with texture and folds on clothing. I am a fan of the techniques you used on your characters' hair.
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